Above are examples of two letters from classmates about my essays I wrote. They are intended to help me and critique what I wrote to help better my paper when I revise it. For example, in some of the letters I received I was told i should work on organization. Also in others structure and making sure I cover all the necessary aspects of the topic. All these features of my essay only benefit me and help shape my final draft into its best possible form. This peer revision resembles the way others helped me in my dunking training. My videos on YouTube were watched by many people, and many of them left comments telling me what was good and what needed improvement. Also how my jumping form and technique could be improved. This constructive criticism was greatly used by me the next time I did a workout or tried jumping.
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This video here of me working out received a lot of comments from viewers. Most talked about my form and what i should focus on. They told me how I should change or fix. This helped me greatly to get the maximum results out of my training. Just like the peer review in my class, the criticism was constructive and helped me achieve the best final result.
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